6M3 This is borderline Merit becuase you have included the use of outer glow and some interesting shadow effects on the lettering. Also you have used an original image. however there are weaknesses in the layout and design of the piece. I think you could make much more accurate use of the spaces around your model. For example, the pug could be smaller, with a little more space around it, I am not convinced by the scattered fashion items under 'summers must haves - try getting all the lettering on to the background colour and making the items line up centrally under the text. Make the 'best birthday gift ideas' central on the model and make the price fit exactly above the bar code.
6M3 This is borderline Merit becuase you have included the use of outer glow and some interesting shadow effects on the lettering. Also you have used an original image. however there are weaknesses in the layout and design of the piece. I think you could make much more accurate use of the spaces around your model. For example, the pug could be smaller, with a little more space around it, I am not convinced by the scattered fashion items under 'summers must haves - try getting all the lettering on to the background colour and making the items line up centrally under the text. Make the 'best birthday gift ideas' central on the model and make the price fit exactly above the bar code.
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